“Babies smell so good,” said my wife, as she took in a deep breath.
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“It’s almost ready,” I said, stirring the contents of the wok.

“Babies smell so good,” said my wife, as she took in a deep breath.
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“It’s almost ready,” I said, stirring the contents of the wok.
This is really cool, but I think it can be ever shorter 💀
(“Babies smell so good,” my wife said, inhaling the smoke from the pot.)
Or something 😂
Haha, that’s a really good edit! 🙂 I’m kind of going for a 1-2 thing, almost like a joke — a setup and a punchline.
The idea of a series of one-sentence horror stories sounds like a really cool and challenging idea, though! I might have a go at something like that in the future, if I’m feeling brave! 🙂
I noticed the pattern when I checked the rest of your posts! It takes a lot of creativity, so keep that up
Thank you, Maryam! 🙂